Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you what I did in cybersmart for week 3. What we had to do was go through the slides and watch some videos about commenting. Then we had a look at some blogs. After we looked at the blogs we looked at one of the comments from each blog. We looked at them because they weren't quality blog comments. They weren't because some of them was very short or had bad spelling, and one of them had a lot of emojis and words that didn't make any sense. After looking at them we had to rewrite the comments and make them good ones. Then we chose the comment we think we rewrote the best, then we wrote down why the new comment is better compared to the old one. Have a look at this google drawing, in the yellow box is why the comment is better, in the green box is some good things to include in a comment, and in the red box is things to NOT include in your comment.
What I learned from this create was that I should always check my comments before posting them to make sure they are good and have included some good things.
Was this helpful? What did you learn?
