Cybersmart - Good and Bad Comments

 Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you what I did in cybersmart for week 3. What we had to do was go through the slides and watch some videos about commenting. Then we had a look at some blogs. After we looked at the blogs we looked at one of the comments from each blog. We looked at them because they weren't quality blog comments. They weren't because some of them was very short or had bad spelling, and one of them had a lot of emojis and words that didn't make any sense. After looking at them we had to rewrite the comments and make them good ones. Then we chose the comment we think we rewrote the best, then we wrote down why the new comment is better compared to the old one. Have a look at this google drawing, in the yellow box is why the comment is better, in the green box is some good things to include in a comment, and in the red box is things to NOT include in your comment. 

What I learned from this create was that I should always check my comments before posting them to make sure they are good and have included some good things. 

Was this helpful? What did you learn?

Maths Week 5 T3

 Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you my create for maths this week. What we had to do was answer some questions from the problem solving sheet. We had to answer at least 4. My buddy was Frankie. Here's our work:

 I know it's a bit blurry and hard to read. And my handwriting is bad, but all it is is some random maths.

What's you favourite way to work out an equation in maths? 

Writing Speech

 Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you my some of my speech on poverty. We have been writing speeches. We could choose to write them on one of these goals. Poverty, Zero hunger, good health and well-being, and quality education. I wrote about poverty. Here's the first couple of paragraph I have:

I hope you liked it!

What are your thoughts on poverty?

How to Comment!

Hi guys. Today I will be sharing with you what I did in cybersmart. What we had to do was go through a slideshow and do some of the activities on it. We read about how to comment and a quality blog comment is made. Then we had a look at Bitable which is a trailer / movie maker. We had to make a video that told others how to comment. Then we had to make a screencastify over the recording. Here's my video!

When I was making this I learnt how to use biteable and I learned some new things to add into my comments next time! I enjoyed making this  because it was fun using biteable and I thought it was fun choosing what template I wanted. I didn't enjoy making a screencastify though because I don't really like recording my voice. When I was making this I was thinking about how I could make it easy for younger kids to understand. Anyway that's it for today I hope you liked the video and that you learnt something!

Was this helpful? Can you write a Quality Comment?

Writing Week 4 T3

Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you what I did in writing this week. What I had to do was write down about poverty the damage it caused and the challenge. I wrote about America. Then we had to write a paragraph on how feel about which ever goal we chose to write our speech about. I wrote a paragraph about poverty. Here it is:

And then we had to write down 6 words or something describing poverty. Here's mine:

What do you know about Poverty?

Reading Week 4 T3

Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you my create for reading this week. What we had to do was choose a text to read and think about the ideas it ssid in the text. Then we had to write down some good and bad things about the text, here's what I wrote down:

Then we had to get a buddy to make a screencastify, I was with Lincoln. We talked about spae exploration if it was or good or bad Here's the link to the screencastify:

Screencastify

What's you thoughts on this?

Reading Create Week 3 T3

Hey guys, i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you my create for reading. What we had to do was read a text about robots, then we had to make a screencastify talking about them. It explains a bit more on the video. Here's the link to mine

Screencastify

And here's the link to the text we read: Text

What's you opinion on this?

Writing Week 3 T3

Hey guys i'm back with another blog! Today I will be sharing with you my create for writing this week. What we had to do was look at speeches and how they're formatted, then we had to try and put a speech back together. Then we had to choose a goal to talk about. I chose poverty, we had to write hard hitting statistics and rhetorical questions about it. Here's mine:

What do you know about poverty?