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Thursday, June 4, 2020

Writing Create Task Week 8

Hey guys i'm back with another blog. Today I will be sharing with you my create task for writing this week. what we had to do was watch some videos, then choose what type of story we want to write. Then we planned out our story and started to write our story's. My story is called The Secret Garden. Here's the first two paragraphs of my story!


Rose was deaf. She didn't say anything, all she would do was write in her little yellow book. The only way she talked to her mum and dad was to use sign language. She didn't have many friends, her mum home schooled her. She did have a best friend though Coco (her dog). Rose and Coco loved going on adventures. But her parents are very protective so she can only go where they are going. Rose liked to think that she had a lot of best friends, she had her parents, Coco, and her Grandparents. She loved her Grandmother and Grandfather. She would run around there massive house and explore all of the lost bedrooms. When she found out that they died she was devastated. She cried for weeks on end. 


Rose woke up with an excited depressed feeling. For today was the day that her and her family went through her grandparents house! She woke up and got dressed in the outfit her Grandmother bought her. She ran into the kitchen and signed for her parents ‘let’s go’. Her parents looked at her and chuckled. When they arrived at her grandmother's house, her parents signed to Rose ‘you can go and adventure while me and your mother go through the house. Rose smiled and ran off before they could do anything. 

I hope you liked it!

Have you ever written a story about a secret garden?

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